Mary DeSantis, Editor/Story Whisperer


Let’s get whispering…

I’m the Story Whisperer—I’m the go-between, listening to you and your story so we can make something that pushes boundaries, leaps off the page, and rocks your readers to the core.

Let’s bring out…
  • Worlds your readers will want to live in (or run from, screaming)
  • Characters who are best-friend (or worst-enemy) material
  • Plots that rocket forward or build like a slow crescendo

Amazing stories are my passion, no matter their shape. I can’t wait to meet yours.

For more about what I do and the genres I work with, check out my editing services here

Ready to dive in? Email me at to start your project down the path to success.

Mary evaluated my epic fantasy, Season of Sacrifice, which wasn’t a light task at over 200k words. She clearly set the expectations up front, was extremely professional, and most importantly, delivered valuable feedback that will produce a story worth reading. I like to think that she helped me level up as a writer and hope to have her edit more of my manuscripts as I continue to produce them.
-Jonathan J Michael
I've had the pleasure of working with Mary for both a critique of my manuscript as well as my query letter. She has been very helpful in identifying what works, what doesn't, as well as offering recommendations for changes. She somehow managed to identify key items that other readers hadn't picked up on, and each time she was right! Her turnaround time is quick, and she is incredibly professional in her communication. I would highly recommend working with Mary!
-Jeff Wiemiller

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